Hi kids! I really like all your cool stories about Mrs Chicken and the Hungry Crocodile. I have tried to write a story ending too. Please can you tell me what you think of it? Is there anything I can do to make it better?
the hungry crocodile was sorry she had tried to eat mrs chicken. i am sorry she said. She offered to take mrs chicken and her chicks back across the river. yes please said mrs chicken. the chicks all clambered aboard crocodile's back and then they set off across the river. PLEASE come and see me again soon, begged the crocodile. I WON'T! laughed mrs chicken. mrs chicken and her chicks ran up the bank happily. they never ever went near the river again and always took their baths in puddles!