Hello, and welcome to Room 27's writing blog. We are a Year 2 class at Meadowbank School in Auckland, New Zealand. The stories on this blog are completely independent first drafts written by the children. Please feel free to leave a comment for us! We hope you enjoy our work.
Saturday, June 21, 2008
Under the Sea
Under the sea where the dolphin's dive deep I'd like to go there when I go to sleep ! we could swim about and have lots of fun ! Until moning arrives with the rising sun !
6 comments:
a nice long store you did
yoo soore is nis
Ilike your writing and your story we made a story abant a crocidile
called monty and he said I dot like the river.we did are spostday on wenesday.
I think it's wonderfull. I love all the under water anamils
well done for making your story rhyme!
It looks li8ke there are a lot of cool sea animals
Well Done Caiti!
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