Hi kids! I really like all your cool stories about Mrs Chicken and the Hungry Crocodile. I have tried to write a story ending too. Please can you tell me what you think of it? Is there anything I can do to make it better?
the hungry crocodile was sorry she had tried to eat mrs chicken. i am sorry she said. She offered to take mrs chicken and her chicks back across the river. yes please said mrs chicken. the chicks all clambered aboard crocodile's back and then they set off across the river. PLEASE come and see me again soon, begged the crocodile. I WON'T! laughed mrs chicken. mrs chicken and her chicks ran up the bank happily. they never ever went near the river again and always took their baths in puddles!
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16 comments:
zook you did a big long ending that is fantastick
i loved it zook
cool story Zook
COOL zook
nice ending zook
you have a long story Zook.
Your story is excellent
FANTASTIC!
nice story ending Zooooooook!
I liked your long story.
It is a long story.It is good because you check your spelling
is it hard writing when your an alien
well done zook good work!
Remember Zook next time you right a story look out for your CAITAL LETTERS!
How did you write so much Zook. That is really cool.
I rember mrs chicken and the hungrey crockeydille.
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