Hello, and welcome to Room 27's writing blog. We are a Year 2 class at Meadowbank School in Auckland, New Zealand. The stories on this blog are completely independent first drafts written by the children. Please feel free to leave a comment for us! We hope you enjoy our work.
Sunday, November 9, 2008
Spase
Shattalls flowt past diffrent planits. planits orbit arond the sun. Astrods crash on planits.
Ethe is the onley leving planit.
Saturn has sopere big rings.
6 comments:
Anonymous
said...
What a super Space poem! Can you think of a line beginning with C (the only letter you forgot!)?
6 comments:
What a super Space poem! Can you think of a line beginning with C (the only letter you forgot!)?
I lice yoru pouwim.
I lice yoru pouwim.
hav you made yoru moonbugis?
it was good riting it was good poowim too.
I LiCD SPASE becos you get to
fLy A ROCit.
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