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Goldylocks and the three bears
One day the mother bear was making porig.The father bear tried the porig. It was to hot so they went for a walk in the forist.Well the three bears went for a walk a little girl was skiping through the the forist then she saw a door that was open so she went in.She saw a big bowl of porig she tried it but was to hot. She saw a meddie side she tried it but it was to swet. So she tried the small bowl and it was just write so she ate it all up. Then she went into the livingroom she sat on father bears chria but it was to haind so she tried mother bears chria but it was to soft so she tried the babby bears chria so she sat down but she brock it. Goldylocks saw some sters so she went up the sters when she wnet up she saw three beds.She tried fathers bed but it was to hard so she tried mother bears bed but it was to soft so she tried babbys bears bed it was the writrt one for her so she went to sleep.Then the three bears came back they looked evrywhere but when they went up the steps they hand some snoring so they rashed up the steis.Then they saw a littel girl .Then the little girl wonk up she saw three bears they where stering at her so she ran all the way home.
6 comments:
I love your story and grat work I love you as a frined!!!!!!!!!$$$$
That is a verey lonig strorey!
What a lovely retelling of the story, Caiti! It's great to see that you have started your sentences with capital letters too!
cool!!!
cool!!!
good work
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