Hello, and welcome to Room 27's writing blog. We are a Year 2 class at Meadowbank School in Auckland, New Zealand. The stories on this blog are completely independent first drafts written by the children. Please feel free to leave a comment for us! We hope you enjoy our work.
Wednesday, September 17, 2008
my brothers tooth
in the weekend I went to my dads house my brothers tooth was wigley it fal out we went for a sleepover at my freinds
2 comments:
Anonymous
said...
What a busy weekend you had! Don't forget to split your writing up into sentences by adding those full stops and capital letters!
2 comments:
What a busy weekend you had! Don't forget to split your writing up into sentences by adding those full stops and capital letters!
Very good writing ...
But next time remember your capital letters and ful stops.
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