Sunday, August 31, 2008

my weekend

On saturday I went to wihike we went on a tran then a ferey and on a car then we got ther and we got off wive Soahie k and my sistis Emily g-h and Isaballa g-h . On sunday I woke up and I got drest we pakid up and went home and wokit t.v.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You are so lucky to have gone to Waiheke, which is one of my favourite places! It sounds like you had fun. Could you break your writing up into more sentences perhaps, by checking to see where you might need to put in a full stop?