once a pon a time there lived a crocodile man he was mean and fierce.He had something no one else had it was Fire!He was the
one that had fire he could do anithing with fire.Fire was his Alone. and when a animal pleadedfor he just laughed Ha Ha
Ha!One day he did the bigest and went to sleep. Inhis sleep he died. he died of no sleep. all the animal saw what but they didn't like the crocodile man so they didn't do anithing about it.
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I tink its a reall y nice peace of work.
I like all the cruters in it.
were did it happen.
why didn't he die when he balanced on his body
Hi Cameron,
I like your story but I can't read the yellow bit. Next time you need to be careful what colours you choose so that people can read it.
Miss Thomas
NICE!
GREAT!
COOL!
WHY CROCODIDE DIE WHEN HE WAS ASLEEP
VERY NICE!
EXLENT!
WHOW!
was crocdile angry
fantastic!
WONDERFUL!!!
I LIKE IT SO MUCH
COOL
WOW LOVELY STORY!
Crocodile man sounds really mean!
WELL DONE
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WELL DONE!
I like that story.
what kind of bird is rainbow bird.
WOW!
GOOD
love it
lovely
I like it!
Do you like it?
COOL
COOL
COOL
A fantastic story
cool story
I love it!
crocodile is mean!
did he have a mean laugh!
COOL
I like your cool story cameron!!!!
why was it called Rainbow bird?
I like the good story
I thinc u shod us u capso.
Did he get hurt when he held the fire?
I love your story what ells did you do
I like your full stops
next time remember to put capiatal letters.
why did the crocodile go ha ha ha?
Hi Camoron,
What a lovely stoy Camoron. What a cool story!
That was a good story , but remember your capital letters.
Wow that is realy cool
cool cameron
I have neva sen you have that mene comments
i think you should get a sticker.
fire sounds scary
wow how amazing
WOW AND COOL
wow carman that story was great and I saw alot of comments
Wae did you do big witing
well done for remembering your fullstpops.
cool story I thought it was a realy nice peace of work
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