Thursday, May 22, 2008

Rainbow bird

once a pon a time there lived a crocodile man he was mean and fierce.He had something no one else had it was Fire!He was the
one that had fire he could do anithing with fire.Fire was his Alone. and when a animal pleadedfor he just laughed Ha Ha
Ha!One day he did the bigest and went to sleep. Inhis sleep he died. he died of no sleep. all the animal saw what but they didn't like the crocodile man so they didn't do anithing about it.

59 comments:

Room 27 Blog Page said...

I tink its a reall y nice peace of work.

Room 27 Blog Page said...

I like all the cruters in it.

Room 27 Blog Page said...

were did it happen.

Room 27 Blog Page said...

why didn't he die when he balanced on his body

Marnie said...

Hi Cameron,
I like your story but I can't read the yellow bit. Next time you need to be careful what colours you choose so that people can read it.
Miss Thomas

Anonymous said...

NICE!

Anonymous said...

GREAT!

Anonymous said...

COOL!

Anonymous said...

WHY CROCODIDE DIE WHEN HE WAS ASLEEP

Anonymous said...

VERY NICE!

Anonymous said...

EXLENT!

Anonymous said...

WHOW!

Anonymous said...

was crocdile angry

Anonymous said...

fantastic!

Anonymous said...

WONDERFUL!!!

Anonymous said...

I LIKE IT SO MUCH

Anonymous said...

COOL

Anonymous said...
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Anonymous said...

WOW LOVELY STORY!

Anonymous said...

Crocodile man sounds really mean!

Anonymous said...

WELL DONE




















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WELL DONE!

Anonymous said...

I like that story.

Anonymous said...

what kind of bird is rainbow bird.

Anonymous said...

WOW!

Anonymous said...

GOOD

Anonymous said...

love it

Anonymous said...

lovely

Anonymous said...

I like it!

Anonymous said...

Do you like it?

Room 27 Blog Page said...

COOL

Room 27 Blog Page said...

COOL

Room 27 Blog Page said...

COOL

Anonymous said...

A fantastic story

Anonymous said...

cool story

Anonymous said...

I love it!

Anonymous said...

crocodile is mean!

Anonymous said...

did he have a mean laugh!

Anonymous said...

COOL

Anonymous said...

I like your cool story cameron!!!!
why was it called Rainbow bird?

Anonymous said...

I like the good story

Anonymous said...

I thinc u shod us u capso.

Anonymous said...

Did he get hurt when he held the fire?

Anonymous said...

I love your story what ells did you do

Anonymous said...

I like your full stops

Anonymous said...

next time remember to put capiatal letters.

Anonymous said...

why did the crocodile go ha ha ha?

Anonymous said...

Hi Camoron,
What a lovely stoy Camoron. What a cool story!

Anonymous said...

That was a good story , but remember your capital letters.

Anonymous said...

Wow that is realy cool

Anonymous said...

cool cameron

Anonymous said...

I have neva sen you have that mene comments

Anonymous said...

i think you should get a sticker.

Anonymous said...

fire sounds scary

Anonymous said...

wow how amazing

Anonymous said...

WOW AND COOL

Anonymous said...

wow carman that story was great and I saw alot of comments

Anonymous said...

Wae did you do big witing

Anonymous said...

well done for remembering your fullstpops.

Anonymous said...

cool story I thought it was a realy nice peace of work